What you think this mistery plot ?

[saidbr2]

This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.

[margaret*e]

If it's a plot for a book the bad spelling would put me off straight away.

Mystery plot.

[cee-dee]

Perhaps it was a plot about a mystery Mister?

[saasher2012]

This poster is from Brazil & if Brazilian the spelling & command of English is better than mine, but if it is a book they are writing I think it's a rather depressing plot line. Sorry!

[right-then-petal]

it sounds like the City is London,the people a immigrants finding it hard after the Goverment cut benifits and turned of their electricity and closed the food banks

and the peeps trying to help them are the normal tree hugger's and do'nt bring hanging back brigade

His Wife will appear in chapter 4 and is found collecting for children in Africa co's it pays a liveing wage and has been going on for over 60 years

i wo.nt spiol the ending in case there a follow up book

[right-then-petal]

[saasher2012]

lol. Yes as I said very depressing ! lol.

[lambsy_uk]

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@saidbr2 wrote:
This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.

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I'm afraid it doesn't sound very inspired; no food, no energy, anti-government protests and dehumanization don't really fit together; it's all a bit unrealistic. If you're a school pupil trying to write a story then carry on, you will improve with age.

[astrologica]

Maybe he/she meant 'misery' plot!

[lambsy_uk]

You may be right there Asto.

[evoman3957]

The Butler did it.........with a Candle Stick...........in the Library........he missed first time........cos it was dark............very dark.........and getting darker every second..........apparently.