What you think this mistery plot ?

saidbr2 · ‎13-08-2014

This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.

margaret*e · ‎13-08-2014

If it's a plot for a book the bad spelling would put me off straight away.

Mystery plot.

cee-dee · ‎13-08-2014

Perhaps it was a plot about a mystery Mister?

It's life Jim, but not as WE know it.
Live long and prosper.

saasher2012 · ‎13-08-2014

This poster is from Brazil & if Brazilian the spelling & command of English is better than mine, but if it is a book they are writing I think it's a rather depressing plot line. Sorry!

**********Sam**********

right-then-petal · ‎13-08-2014

it sounds like the City is London,the people a immigrants finding it hard after the Goverment cut benifits and turned of their electricity and closed the food banks

and the peeps trying to help them are the normal tree hugger's and do'nt bring hanging back brigade

His Wife will appear in chapter 4 and is found collecting for children in Africa co's it pays a liveing wage and has been going on for over 60 years

i wo.nt spiol the ending in case there a follow up book

Petal

right-then-petal · ‎13-08-2014

Petal

saasher2012 · ‎13-08-2014

lol. Yes as I said very depressing ! lol.

**********Sam**********

lambsy_uk · ‎13-08-2014

@saidbr2 wrote:
This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.

I'm afraid it doesn't sound very inspired; no food, no energy, anti-government protests and dehumanization don't really fit together; it's all a bit unrealistic. If you're a school pupil trying to write a story then carry on, you will improve with age.

astrologica · ‎13-08-2014

Maybe he/she meant 'misery' plot!

lambsy_uk · ‎13-08-2014

You may be right there Asto.

evoman3957 · ‎13-08-2014

The Butler did it.........with a Candle Stick...........in the Library........he missed first time........cos it was dark............very dark.........and getting darker every second..........apparently.