@saidbr2 wrote:
This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.
I'm afraid it doesn't sound very inspired; no food, no energy, anti-government protests and dehumanization don't really fit together; it's all a bit unrealistic. If you're a school pupil trying to write a story then carry on, you will improve with age.
