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Hi there,


 


Will anybody help me out? Can someone correct if nessesary yhis sentenses:


 


Can't Catch Big Carp or Barbel?? Buy this

automatic cut LEAD!!FEEDER FISHING


Excellent Lead when you fishing in long distance when the bite alarm are too weak!!

Can't Catch Big Carp or Barbel


             Buy this

automatic cut LEAD/FEEDER FISHING

Petal


Excellent Lead when your fishing at long distance, when the bite alarm is too weak

Petal

Many Thanks:)

10phizz
Conversationalist

Excellent lead when you`re fishing at long distance when the bite alarm is too weak.


 


 


You`re = you are       apostrophe replaces the missing "a"


your = belonging to you     eg your coat

Excellent line when you`re fishing at long distance when the bite alarm is too weak


 


 


I don't go fishing,but a line is what fish are caught with if using a fishing rod.


 


 


a "lead" suggests something maybe electrical.  🙂

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