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What you think this mistery plot ?

saidbr2 — Tue, 12 Aug 2014 23:33:38 GMT

This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

margaret*e — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 07:00:34 GMT

If it's a plot for a book the bad spelling would put me off straight away.

Mystery plot.

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

cee-dee — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 10:22:59 GMT

Perhaps it was a plot about a mystery Mister?

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

saasher2012 — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 10:35:00 GMT

This poster is from Brazil & if Brazilian the spelling & command of English is better than mine, but if it is a book they are writing I think it's a rather depressing plot line. Sorry!

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

right-then-petal — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 11:31:05 GMT

it sounds like the City is London,the people a immigrants finding it hard after the Goverment cut benifits and turned of their electricity and closed the food banks

and the peeps trying to help them are the normal tree hugger's and do'nt bring hanging back brigade

His Wife will appear in chapter 4 and is found collecting for children in Africa co's it pays a liveing wage and has been going on for over 60 years

i wo.nt spiol the ending in case there a follow up book

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

right-then-petal — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 13:32:19 GMT

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

saasher2012 — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 13:48:16 GMT

lol. Yes as I said very depressing ! lol.

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

lambsy_uk — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 13:59:56 GMT

@saidbr2 wrote:
This is a good mistery plot?
In a city where the night prevailed and energy and food were gone.
Protests against the government only grew and the night grew darker
In desperation were a father and two sons who were trying to get some strength from a group that had to survive the increasing dehumanization of people and increasing darkness.

I'm afraid it doesn't sound very inspired; no food, no energy, anti-government protests and dehumanization don't really fit together; it's all a bit unrealistic. If you're a school pupil trying to write a story then carry on, you will improve with age.

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

astrologica — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 14:53:17 GMT

Maybe he/she meant 'misery' plot!

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

lambsy_uk — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 15:14:57 GMT

You may be right there Asto.

Re: What you think this mistery plot ?

evoman3957 — Wed, 13 Aug 2014 20:40:45 GMT

The Butler did it.........with a Candle Stick...........in the Library........he missed first time........cos it was dark............very dark.........and getting darker every second..........apparently.